Mousie you are so talented i wish i could be half as good as you keep writing!! 5/5 by the way did you get my email? ttyl love yas solo

I loved this! I thought the flow was excellent, and consistantly followed a pattern, which is always a good thing. Excellent wording, too.

This is a great poem, i loved the ending lines

"You fight off the storm
With the tears wiped away,
You'll be safe in his arms
Where forever you'll stay."

great job, 5/5!!! keep it up and thanx for the comment on my poem.

Beautifully penned. I love the imagery. Nice flow. 5/5.