Without Notice.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 4, 2006


-Without Notice.-

The clouds are rolling in - - in the sky above,
While she sits alone with a glass of wine,
Swallowing her pride, drunk on your love,
Choking, as the midnight bells chime.

With tears coating her eyes of green,
The foggy mirror distorts the bump,
A steamy bath taking her to an old scene,
Her breathing shattered, blocked by a lump.

The water steams around her knees,
Breathing in deep, she softly sighs,
Lowering herself as the water does tease,
Softly lapping around her neck, she cries.

As dawn fades in, the day goes on,
In the bath tub, her body lay cold,
A desperate mother to be; forever gone,
Along with her baby, only twelve weeks old.

© Jenna Elphick
October 4, 2006.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Ohkay.. you just asked what one made me cry.. this one made me cry

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Deepness of the JEnna... i needa catch up on your poems deary... lol got like a 100 of them to read still... oh and ive come to the site and have been reading your poems.. just not commented for a while and such.. you no... lol

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my god.. That is so sad! A wonderfully written poem... and it almost made me tear-up..It gave me chills! Simply amazing...Now, I did not understand the second stanza, however...But, the rest was absolutely amazing. Wonderful job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5