This seems very angry...but I can't help but think that if the guy had problems, no one tried to help out or ask why. I mean, I like the poem, but it sounds a little unfair on his behalf.

I really like this. The last stanza just kind of brings the whole thing together and really puts all of your emotions into those couple of lines. Great job on this. 5/5

Wow love your poems..they are awsome and amazing