Empty Space

by Chris Rodriguez   Oct 4, 2006


I couldn't tell
That some things are made broken
Saying farewell to you at the motel
Everything is left unspoken
If this is the end, what will come
From all the things I have done?

Closing my eyes and the bombs go off
Lost in hundreds of other minds
Is the will in me enough
To follow the road wherever it winds?
To you am I just an empty space?
I don't want to become another forgotten face

Everyone knows I'm in over my head
No one can really understand
It's not easier done than said
She's the rock upon which I stand
But I'm becoming the past
Something that won't last

I wish I could have met you
Before everything got so complicated
Strangers looking for someone to help them through
And now for me everything is faded
I'm loosing you without trying
If I let go now all I said was just lying

Can't stop the future that's coming
And I'm passing out win or lose
A bitter sweet symphony is what I'm humming
My understanding is my safety fuse
I'm in every way black and white
And I want to stay with you here tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jack Rabbit

    Not sure how to find the words to describe this. Great Job I could say, but I know that wouldn't quite cover it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The reality is so gripping...this was very very good work, at the least. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Great poem asweel and nice rhythm and great flow of words

    Btw thanks for tghe comments yeah I need to edit that one lols
    I just feel so dumb this days

    Geneross