Her Own World

by DeadGirl AKA Becka   Oct 5, 2006


There once was a girl
she hated the world
so she created her own
It had monsters and demons
stuff you can't explain.

She created this world...
to hide all her pain.
Sure it may seem
like a terrifying place
But who is to say...
To her this is her favorite place.

Because when home
she feels all alone.
sure she has dad,
but he's so bad.

He hurts her in all the wrong ways,
He uses her for his own selfish games.
She wants to live in her world,
so that she can be,
an ordinary girl.

*~DeadGirl~*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It's good, but the world does not seem so ordaniry. Maybe you should make it seem more like that of which an 'ordanary' person would live in. It is a good poem, and I don't mean to be rude, but thats the only thing that seems off about it.