by DeadGirl AKA Becka Oct 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There once was a girl |
It's good, but the world does not seem so ordaniry. Maybe you should make it seem more like that of which an 'ordanary' person would live in. It is a good poem, and I don't mean to be rude, but thats the only thing that seems off about it. |