by Bradley Peter Oct 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I was a smart, outstanding boy |
Wow, i'm so impressed. this poem has a lot of meaning and makes questions, also lots of good rhymes. i really enjoyed it, keep it up! |
by *Charisma*
I felt that the first stanza was weak compared to the rest of the poem, but I did enjoy the flow to it. Good job! Jpoet* |
by Bethan
I really really loved dis one cos it had a story to it and maintained the rhythm of the story and poem throughout. Da guy in and out of jail reminded me ov sum1, cos ov da stupidness and half cracked tooth. |