The Life of a Idiot..

by The Lonely Rose   Oct 5, 2006


There was a girl
Striving to be perfect.
Always failing
Always putting pressure on herself as so does her parents even harder
Feeling alone
Crying inside
Not knowing what to do
She starts to break..
Having Friends that she is loosing
Deep inside she hopes to find the truth in life
Someone to help her
But no one see right through her..
In order for people to think that nothing is wrong
She acts fake..
She acts happy..
Like nothing is wrong
Scared to reveal her own self to everyone
Feeling Broken
Feeling Fallen
And never Angelic
She was a Broken Fallen Angel
Who is this idiot you might ask this stupid loner this girl who shouldn't deserve to live is.....
me....

*i put a lot into this on my rough draft. I put a lot of my emotions on this...I even put my hand print on this...well it might not be the best but tell me what u think*

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    [She acts fake..
    She acts happy..
    Like nothing is wrong]

    ^^That resembles me very much. This poem also brought out a lot of my emotions, as well yours. It was well done, minus the flow. There was none. It really threw me off in places. Also, there are lots of grammar mistakes. Try reading it over, and fixing them, and maybe changing around the lines more so the flow is better. Other than that, it was a good read. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Scream_my_name

    Good job, it was really good, reminded me of how i feel sometimes. " She acts fake..
    She acts happy..
    Like nothing is wrong
    Scared to reveal her own self to everyone" nice wording

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