Good job, it was really good, reminded me of how i feel sometimes. " She acts fake..
She acts happy..
Like nothing is wrong
Scared to reveal her own self to everyone" nice wording

[She acts fake..
She acts happy..
Like nothing is wrong]

^^That resembles me very much. This poem also brought out a lot of my emotions, as well yours. It was well done, minus the flow. There was none. It really threw me off in places. Also, there are lots of grammar mistakes. Try reading it over, and fixing them, and maybe changing around the lines more so the flow is better. Other than that, it was a good read. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha