Our Secret Place

by Bradley Peter   Oct 5, 2006


Days spent in the summer
We'd just lay in the grass
Listening to the sounds of nature
Watching the clouds pass

We'd lay together for hours
With the sun-rays on our faces
Then we'd fall fast asleep
Dreaming of magical places

If the sun ever got too hot
We'd hide under the shade
The only tree for miles
As if just for us it was made

It was our secret place
Free from homework and chores
A place that we could go
That was only mine and yours

Each day was a dream
And just as magical as the last
Time seemed to stand still
As the world just whizzed on past

Every summer after that
I sat at the tree and cried
Only two days back at school
You were in a crash and died

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Awww
    *tear*
    so sad brad
    It was a very unpredictable and captive poem.

    keep writin'
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Holy.. i did not see that coming. this is so good. i love it.
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow what a sad ending. This was a very nice poem and I enjoyed it.
    Dreaming of magical places
    Loved that line...it just touches the dreamer in me! Jpoet*