Done with you.

by DeathsLove   Oct 5, 2006


Treatment special, to only one of course.

Never, have I been on the 'good list'. Never will I be.

I'm sick,
I'm tired,
I'm angry,

I put you above the rest.
Held you on a pedistal so high.
Yet, I can not be treated the same.
I am scum to you.
Down in the pits of hell is where I rank.

You sicken me.
You poison me.
I can't find my way out.
It's all fading.

My head throbs with the broken promises,
The broken promises you poured down upon me.
I can't escape from the weight,
it's holding me down.

No longer will I be your stepping stone.
Find someone else to piss upon.

I'm done with you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I like the idea of your poem and there are some great lines but it doesnt quite flow.... for example, "My head throbs with the broken promises,
    The broken promises you poured down upon me.
    I can't escape from the weight,
    it's holding me down." ....this could be better express My head throbs with broken promises, the deception you poured down upon me, I am trapped in the cage of your lies and its holding me down..... thats maybe some idea to make it better flow.... but good start

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The imagery was so great and vivid. You do a great job with expression.

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