Battle to love each other

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 5, 2006


We onced loved
We once cared
We once held each other through hard times
We once became one
But its over
We dropped dead in our tracks
And walked away from our battle to love eachother
I dont know what happened
I dont know what made us think
We could make it through
I guess we couldnt believe hard enough
To know that if we really dig deep down
We'd love eachother like no other
But I guess we didn't dig deep enough
Or believe hard enough
To find that one wish
To be together forever
So here we are
Different people, seperate lives
Acted as if we never existed
I guess this one didn't work out well
As we had hoped we planned it to be
I guess we had thought we loved eachother
Enough to go through these times
Then must end it all
With a simple drop from a battle to love each other

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad...something I can relate to..
    I liked how you wrote it, the first few lines really pulled me in.
    I think you did a good job on this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I'm sorry, but - for me - the last part didnt quite make sense, sory, but i like the beginning though! nice

    Narc xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting write you have here,I know many out there can relate to this one for sure.
    Good write.

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Great poem! i loved how it flowed together so nicely but didnt rhyme. thats hard to do. u are a really good poet! can u read any of my poems. i on;y have 5.

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