Great poem! i loved how it flowed together so nicely but didnt rhyme. thats hard to do. u are a really good poet! can u read any of my poems. i on;y have 5.

Interesting write you have here,I know many out there can relate to this one for sure.
Good write.

I'm sorry, but - for me - the last part didnt quite make sense, sory, but i like the beginning though! nice

Narc xxx

This was so sad...something I can relate to..
I liked how you wrote it, the first few lines really pulled me in.
I think you did a good job on this.