Hmmm. Its about trust,deceit and living life.I think, thats my first impression.
Great poem by the way.
Truly you are talented.

I really liked the meaning behind this poem. it was very intersting in the things u described. the rhyme scheme was very solid which was good and the flow was very nice. great peom overall. 5/5

Hmm, how everything good eventually goes bad? Lol, I don't know. I really loved it though.

-Jenna.

I think it might be about friendship? Idk.. But it was great! 5/5

Betraying a friend or loved one maybe? I'm not really sure Noni.

I liked it though. I thought you wrote it well, it was wonderful. I liked the wording choices and you did a great job.

I like the flow and mysterious wording of this poem, but I must admit it remains a mystery to me exactly what it is about

[ As a long ago plague haunt the lands
^ I think it should be "haunts" not "haunt" ]
Wow.. Hmm, that is quite hard to understand.. Lol, or maybe it is just me =P I think it is about how the world has been going down the drain.. Friendships no longer exist, brothers are fighting against brothers, bedtime stories and lullabies no longer are told.. I dont know, that is just my observation.. I could be totally wrong =) Nicely done though, very creative and the descriptions were awesome! 5/5

Hm. It has something to do with god, and reading the bible.. I think, well that's the kinda message I got from it.

A very good poem Noni, and I love how it's so complicated to figure out the true meaning. Nicely done. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I think this poem is about the end of the world.. and this is what is left... Lies and hatred scribbled on walls... brothers killing one another... This really makes you think a lot. Amazing... I'm adding you to my favorites ;) favorite stanza:
Brother against brother as the Bible says
Trust falls, trust hates, trust none at all
What the old sins has been is now what it is
Small things evolve and holds us enthral
great job!
5/5

I thought it was about friendship? I really enjoyed it, even if it wasn't. 5/5

I like it and you made it sound like a lot of work was put into this. Congrats on the contest. :D 5/5

Again, you are here with another great poem that speakes to its reader......

wonderful job........5/5

Again, you are here with another great poem that speakes to its reader......

wonderful job........5/5