Excellent written poem. True write too, no one should be judged untill they know the whole story. Again great poem 5/5 |
by Kristina
Oh wow. amazing job on this poem. it's so true. i hate when people say other people cut for attention, it's just so stupid. great job on this poem, it really says a lot. keep it up! 5/5 |
Excellent!! It is very true! Yeah cutting or any from of self harm is NOT for attention. People who think that are just deluded. I love this poem, Great job!! Keep it up! xx |
by X2892
Very good poem 5/5 all the way |
Great write! Good topic and I totally agree with what you said in the poem---It flows nicely and it kept my attention the whole way through! Keep it up--5/5 |
I believe the repetition of “If A Cutter Cuts For Attention†aids in driving your point home |
Hey, well done, good poem. Your rhyming Is really good, but In some parts, the flow Is abit jumpy, also, capitalise all your I's. |
by LadyPearl
Good poem. I can't agree completely. But you do have point about hiding the cuts instead of telling everyone. Keep it up |
by Shandra
Nice job i agreee. 5/5 |
This is so very true. And it's written so well. I really agree with it. Keep writing hon |
by ForeverYoung
Good poem indeed, but i didnt realy think that the ending made much sence. |
by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings
Hey yeah great poem I hate the fact when people said to me that I only cutted to get attention! it drove me crazy until finally when someone said that to me I sat them down & told them my whole story & they felt really bad. But I quit cutting I got help and saw some counselors or shrinks or whatever and got help. But this poem is totally true. I loved it. Great work. Keep it up. |
This poem is so true.... people are always saying cutters cut for attention. i love this poem |
by Kayla
Wow! great job! you really got the emotions across and i really related to what you were talking about. i hate when people say that others cut for attention and this was a great thing to write! i hope it helps people to understand that cutting isnt for attention. rhyme scheme works in this poem and imagery is good. i love how you repeat IF A CUTTER CUTS FOR ATTENTION throughout the poem. |
Oh i'd liked it!!!! i could kinda relate my cuzin used to cut her self and i jst felt so bad for her seeing all the scars! but now thankfully she got over it! i hope dat i da poem is about u dat u will get over it to! 5/5!!! |
by Jenni
Wow. this poem is so true. i have had friends that have done that and they didn't tell me for a while. this is a very sensitive subject and I feel as though you have captured it well. 5/5 |
by aloner
Wow in too deep. |
by Broke&Lost
This was a very good poem and very true. You did a wonderful job on it. I always enjoy reading your poetry becuase I can connect with it on a personal level...well some like this one I mean. |
GREAT POEM. its so true people who cut don't do it for attention, but i do know some people who do cut for attention and that drives me crazy. this poem is really good. you're really good |