Nice rimes too bad i didn't feel it. this poem is a bit un-personal to me so it doesn't have much feelings or passion in my opinion. rate fair to good dunno yet. i'll go with fair cuz i just didn't feel it

Heyy forget her i think it rocks thats how ifeel wit my new boi mike so i fell it rate mine sometime

Hey this is great it does have feeling it is to bad that reborn cant see that.