Wonderful job. Because of the title, did the olive eyes stand for the spots?

"Olive eyes hold sharp gazes"
This line hold the poem together, its the strongest line for me. along with
the mysterious ending.
5/5

I totally get it. I've read a lot of Haiku poems. I've always loved the concept of them but I never truly understood the whole syllable counting thing until I just read yours. Now I totally get it. I enjoyed reading this poem. Great job! 5/5 Keep up the excellent work.

Letty

Wow awesome poem
5/5

Woah, i love it. I like reading haikus. Ive never written one thoguh but this is great! Love the discription and evrything! 5/5 xx

Very good. The last line was great and really brought to poem home

Elegant deciet.

Great job

Happiness
Jeannie

I realy dont now what to say to this one, i loved the last line
'elegant deciet' but i thought the other two didnt really live up to it!

4/5

~Murder.

Hey, i like the way you've interpreted the Sharp gazes as deceit, well done, short n sweet.
Love Mel

Great job on the Haiku. i've tried to write one many of times and never could =[. you don't seem to have a problem with it though. excellent job! 5/5

~Kristina

This is another great poem that i liked. 5/5

Nice!
short but amazing!
keep it up!

Wow...this is probably one of the best haikus i've ever read

Woah, very nicely written! The last line is such a strong finish, with perfect words. You chose exactly the right words to put what you wanted across. Excellently written. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie x

This is a great haiku, i love it! short, simple but it paints a great picture. 5/5