Thats a beautiful inspiring poem ,very few takes love with positive attitute.
Great work!

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is written differently to most love poems on here and was a refreshing change. Well done on a wonderful write :] 5/5 xx

This is really very beautifully written...keep it up

all the best and take care

This is a wonderful poem. I think you can make it stronger though. The third line of the first verse basically means the same as the second line. Third line of the second verse means the same thing as the second line. You might want to consider changing those third lines - They are also much longer than all the other lines as well.

Just a suggestion :-)

What a beautiful love poem. Your love is shining in this write.

One thing I want to let you know
You may have many things to achieve
You may have to walk many a mile
But like the church with the chime
And Poem's love with the rhyme
You're the undivided part of me
You're my only reason to smile

I really loved these lines they touched my heart. Excellent :)
Take care Cindy

This is a very nice poem..i truely do feel you were thinking of someone special when you wrote this which is how i am suppose to feel. i'm supposed to be wondering who it is u fell in love with and r they as great as they seem...and i am thinking it so i guess u reached ur goal. Bravo
<3
L.C

Wonderful!!

Good Heavens! What a delighful piece!

An excellent poem, great work!

Awww that is the most heart fur filled poem I have EVER read.Thank you for reading my poem Hope to see some more poems like this!!
xx Rox Keep it up!

This poem was amazing, it was very very well written. I loved how you used expressions for your love for that person .

it was a very beautiful poem and i enjoyed reading it .

great work, keep up the amazing job.

A really great poem, very touching and it really shows your love
Good work =]

Aww.... beautiful..