That was a very moving poem. the inagery in it was great and it flowed amazingly. i had shivers at the end. great poem! 5/5

It's sad but very well written. flowed really nicely. i can kind of relate to it. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Hey, i really enjoyed this poem...keep up the work.

bubbles (SAMANTHA)

So very sad...so beautifully written..
I liked this because there were heaps of emotion in it, I really felt the pain behind the words.