I read several of your poems and while all of them r good, they all need a little bit of work! first of all i'd love to see some longer poems by u cuz yours r so short u dont really see your individual style. they also could use more structure and maybe a good rhyme scheme....ur really talented and with a little practice could be amazing...i dont mean to nag at u but i appreciate wen ppl take the time to give me advice that ACTUALLY HELPS! other than one-liners that apply to every poem on the site....i think u can grow to be an amazing poem....keep it up! id appreciate it if u could comment on my poems!
andi