by Lady Nik Oct 6, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
In my hands I hold your life and mine too. You can look at me, but I can't stand the sight of you. You told me to listen to my heart as it beats. I told you to look in the mirror, and tell me what you see. |
by mier
Beautifully written.. The flow of words were amazing... An amazing read... So different from poems I have read but in a good way... |
by Little Dot
Amazing job. Such a great poem. I thought that it was very unique and that's always what I look for in poems, it makes them so much better. Great work on this. Keep it up. |
by MyMercy
This is awesome, excellent job, one of my favorites, in fact, i'll add it to my favorites, very nice. i love it. |
by Amber Parker
This is twisted, unique, sad and dark, four elements that make a really great storyline (in my mind). |