This is twisted, unique, sad and dark, four elements that make a really great storyline (in my mind).

Awesome. This is really great. It's the kind of thing I love to read.

~Scarlett

This is awesome, excellent job, one of my favorites, in fact, i'll add it to my favorites, very nice. i love it.

Amazing job. Such a great poem. I thought that it was very unique and that's always what I look for in poems, it makes them so much better. Great work on this. Keep it up.

Beautifully written.. The flow of words were amazing... An amazing read... So different from poems I have read but in a good way...

Very creative...