This was very good. The imagery fantastic. way to go. Keep it up.

great job.

happiness
Jeannie

Awh, wow.. This was so sad but so full of meaning.. The flow was good and the descriptions full of power and sadness.. Wonderful work 5/5

Powerfully written, as Jeannie has said, great work with imagery, there a good constant flow, brilliant. Cheers.

'Whitey