That was a good poem. it was unique. i liked the emotion you put in it. u might want to add a bit more punctuation though. just a suggestion. overall a great love poem! 5/5

I really like this. It kind of reminds me of something I'm going through right now and you did an amazing job at capturing the moment. Great job on this.. You've got a wonderful way with words! I can't wait to read more! 5/5