Hate

by Gem   Oct 6, 2006


I can't believe I hate someone so much
And guess what that someone is you
I recoil at the thought of being in your clutch
You're some sort of wretched taboo!

Cos I honestly wish you'd just disappear
To where I could never see you again
I'd give out an enormous cheer
And crack open expensive champagne

You always have to get one over me
"Anything you do I can outshine"
Well I'm afraid I will have to disagree
Cos you get your kicks by taking what's mine

I despise you right down to into my core
Everything 'bout you makes me feel unclean
You're just another little blonde wh**e
A boyfriend stealing machine

I'm not the only one who feels like this
You've pissed off everyone all on your own
Cos we all just wish you just didn't exist
So take the hint and leave us alone

I never knew I could feel this way
I could feel the emotion that's 'hate' so strong
It's weighing me down most every day
Yet surprisingly it doesn't feel wrong ©

*Gem*

(Not my usual kind of poem, but trust me, if you knew this ex friend of mine, you\'d understand my feelings perfectly. Peace x)

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "I despise you right down to into my core
    Everything 'bout you makes me feel unclean
    You're just another little blonde wh**e
    A boyfriend stealing machine"

    This is a great stanza! My sis feels this way about my best friend even though she's not! She has blonde hair and she's pretty. So, that makes my sis thinks she's terrible. She's never even stolen anyone's boyfriend! Ugh, it's annoying. lol, But I do see where you're coming from with this. I loved it. Good flow and rhyming!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Hahaha awwww you really hate her then?
    cant say i blame you as i can see why i mean ive never got on with her either so im bound to agree with this poem.
    but we did all notice the way she liked marcus so yeh GO GEM \m/

    wuvz ya
    x x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris W.

    Very good and well written. it flows nicely, very easy to read.

    thanx for your comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    This is an amazing poem. I have one person that makes me feel this way and i never realised i had it in me to feel that such strong amount of hate.
    Your poem is excellent. 5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    I felt the emotion from this poem reaching out.. Excellent write! 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~