I felt the emotion from this poem reaching out.. Excellent write! 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

This is an amazing poem. I have one person that makes me feel this way and i never realised i had it in me to feel that such strong amount of hate.
Your poem is excellent. 5/5

Kelly
xx

Very good and well written. it flows nicely, very easy to read.

thanx for your comment

Hahaha awwww you really hate her then?
cant say i blame you as i can see why i mean ive never got on with her either so im bound to agree with this poem.
but we did all notice the way she liked marcus so yeh GO GEM \m/

wuvz ya
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"I despise you right down to into my core
Everything 'bout you makes me feel unclean
You're just another little blonde wh**e
A boyfriend stealing machine"

This is a great stanza! My sis feels this way about my best friend even though she's not! She has blonde hair and she's pretty. So, that makes my sis thinks she's terrible. She's never even stolen anyone's boyfriend! Ugh, it's annoying. lol, But I do see where you're coming from with this. I loved it. Good flow and rhyming!
xoxo