Hehe my youngest does that all the time lol, Great poem well done 5/5 xx

Thats so cute! lol i can picture my cousin doin that...haha adorable

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

I thought this could of done with a little more work, but was a good idea.

Brad

Haha very cute poem 5/5

That was very fun to read. Love the title. Great Job.

How many magical bath tubs do you know? lol. I did forget to write that the bath tub was actually alive...sorry. I'll try to make more sense in the future. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.

Brad

Lol.. this was a really cute poem, about someting that does happen, and litlens' do love... it was fun to read, and just to atmospherical lol... great vibe..keep writting..
please could you read, comment and rate on some of my poems please, it would be much apprechiated.... Kirsty xxx

I think its cute :)

LOL, thats was definetly funny:D Sounds like me, like 2 years ago, I did that and fell hard, I could barely walk for days, I twisted my ankle bad:P Thats a cool poem

Lol great poem. I used to do that until one time when my niece was chasing me and I had socks on and fell right on my butt!! lol anyways great poem!!

Lol, Really cute poem. Great rhyming and nice flow! well done. 5/5

~Chelsea