This poem is so kool it explains me and my x i loved it keep em comin

Wow! that was intense. i think we've all been there at one time or another but i dont think most of us could put it inot words so nicely. great poem!

Hey that was pretty good! Thanx for reading mine, I will try to read some more of yours later. Keep it up!

Wow.. I loved this! I can definitely relate to this and I absolutely loved the last line. You did a great job on this! I loved it! 5/5

HUNNY, KYLE DID SCREW UP ALREADY. HE'S A PLAYER. I'M SORRY HE WENT AFTER YOU AND BROKE YOUR HEART.

I LOVE YOU SIS!
ASHLA

Helplessness, the most terifying feeling! emotion - excellent, weakness - excellent, i change my mind, this is my favourite! i think (of what i've read) this is your best poem!

oh, and does that mean i should reserwe you a place in the compitition?

Narc xxx