Wow....deep very deep indeed lol great poem i adored it the hole way through
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Oh my god you're so young and talented i hope u continue ur gift sweetie 5/5

Wow! what a wonderful poem!! i love it...keep the great work up!

Hey you are pretty good, and i was wondering if you had any ideas for poems for me... it would be wonderful if you did...well ttyl

This is not only about a loss of a house. this can be incorporated into many differnet topics. just loss itself.

i liked the way you wrote this poem.

it shows great emotion and i will read more! i gave you a 5. to keep at your perfect record.

David

This is beautiful. it really is but too many commas. no offense to you because it is so wonderfull but far too many commas. sorry.

You express such sorrow so wonderfully and you catch a person up in your stories so nicely that I feel like I was really there and feeling it myself!
Never let the world make you give up your gift. It will take you far or at least help you make it through whatever the world throws at you.
A perfect 5 and I will have to read all of the rest of yours.

Its interesting how you can use flames as the turning point in a human life and use the home as the place of memory to the human mind seeing the turning point in life how simple it is to make a persons life in to a shining heaven or a painful hell.5/5

Like I said on the last one, just as great the second time as the first. 5.0 like all your others! ^.^

Lots of pain and sadness in here that you express so wonderfully. Keep up the great work! =)

Beautifully done excellent metaphors,great job Hawkeye.

Thought a tad repetitive, it shows the same advanced thought process and the use of some vocab words is something that stands out in your poem as I've seen people much older who stick to words spoken in children. I have dark poems, so I'mreading sad ones instead.

Very well written poem, it was deep and intruging, nessa