The Stain Deep Within

by Fay   Oct 6, 2006


The never ending pain and stain that remains within,
Only leaves her with sadness and the shedding of tears,
Her other side she's battled with has now become her evil twin.
She has struggled and attempted to fight with for many years.

The never ending journey has always been the same.
The forever broken heart that cannot find a way to heal,
Who is she to put for the blame?
When everything that happens around her doesn't seem real.

Days pass by thinking it will all fade away,
When in actual fact, it all seems to build,
The never ending pain and stain is forever to stay.
Who is going to be her protective shield?

The love she's been looking for she can't seem to find.
Dreaming day after day that she will somehow disappear,
The thoughts and doubts stir up in her mind,
Reminding her that she still has another year.

The stain deep within is an open wound, that can never seal,
The pain fades for a while then keeps returning,
The wound is too deep that it cannot find a way to heal.
Her heart cannot cope with it's deep inner burning.

There are times she wants to let go,
The patience she's had has been her constant pain,
Drowning in despair with her head held low,
She has nothing left to grasp onto to keep her sane.

The love she's been looking for she can't seem to find.
Dreaming day after day that she will somehow disappear,
The thoughts and doubts stir up in her mind,
Reminding her that she still has another year.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vacant Expressions

    Hello, thanks for your comment. You were right i can relate to alot of your poetry! Very nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    You were right I can really relate to this poem.It's great and has excellent flow to it!Thankies for the comment you left me I changed the title to "Giving Up Slowly" if you wanted to know..

  • 17 years ago

    by Desirae

    I like this it deep i no what ur talking about it just like u no what im talking about and ill give u 5/5 and ill will add u on my fav

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    This is very good. good job. its very deep and easy for people to relate. good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    First of all thanks for your comment, i suffer form bulimia so i know what an eating disorder can do to you, so i'm so glad your friend has you to support her through this! Secoundly this poem was excellent. I really liked the words used. When i first read it, i thought that the third, fourth and all the other stanza#s should of began with "the never ending..." as you used repitition in the first two stanzas. I liked therhyme scheme you had going hear, it's quite effective. many people could probably relate to this peom, and this kept me more intrested in reading it, i was hooked from the start. A great read! keep it up! xx

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