Comments : Dwindling away

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Wow thats deep and i like it A LOT

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow this poem blew me way. Excellent write! The style and the flow were fantastic. You have an amazingly beautiful way of expressing yourself even if it is not a happy poem...such a great read.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Passionately sad....not sure how this one got by me. Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Failed Attempt

    Excellent words and imagery
    extreemly powerful
    great job
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww
    Your a great poetic person.
    I admire your work so much.
    Great words and rythmes.
    xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Geoff Clemence

    One of the best poems I've read. I know exactly how that feels and you've written it perfectly. A sad but brilliant write.