Endless battle

by Simple Sensation   Oct 6, 2006


This endless battle goes on
I will never win.
The demons are surrounding,
Enclosing me in
Inside of this wall,
The memories are consuming
Eating away at me
They will never stop.
Ill always be the burden
Making myself an unsolvable problem
Im killing myself
But maybe death is the answer?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    I go through these internal battles as well. I say, listen to Maria Mena. If you can, check out-mariamena.no or google her and go to her norway best site. It's in english and listen to her songs. Especially Internal Dialouge, it's amazing! Keep up the work!

    naima

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    DeAtH-NoT tHe AnSwEr**

    =] So never ever think that. *SmIlE*

    This was a really good poem hunn. It was sad but excellent. I give you a 5/5! Muah! Every line went together greatly. Keep it up.

    When you write more, pm me or something or I will just check up on it. Keep the poems coming. =]

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really liked this. The flow and rhythm of it was amazing and it held up very well. It had so much emotion in it.. You're a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow! Strong yet great! Good job on this one! You're a great writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very well done. Deep and emotional. I made a mistake i wanted you to comment Because of you. But im going to comment 2 more of yours for that. Sorry about that. 5/5 by the way.

    :)
    Taylor