I really liked this. The flow and rhythm of it was amazing and it held up very well. It had so much emotion in it.. You're a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep it up & Stay strong! 5/5

DeAtH-NoT tHe AnSwEr**

=] So never ever think that. *SmIlE*

This was a really good poem hunn. It was sad but excellent. I give you a 5/5! Muah! Every line went together greatly. Keep it up.

When you write more, pm me or something or I will just check up on it. Keep the poems coming. =]

>black&&blue

I go through these internal battles as well. I say, listen to Maria Mena. If you can, check out-mariamena.no or google her and go to her norway best site. It's in english and listen to her songs. Especially Internal Dialouge, it's amazing! Keep up the work!

naima