Zac

by yasmeen   Oct 6, 2006


When i first came to this school i thought you were cool and cute and funny then i thought you were cute,funny,sweet and nice and also smart

and now i like you and I'm scad to tell you the truth but you like my friend and I'm trying not to hate but i wanted you to be my soul mate

now she likes you what should i do just stop liking you or stay confused
i hope you find out soon cause i really like you and thats the truth

(this one is just like why but i want to see with one is beater email me or write a comment plz and thank you)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chrisi-Beth

    You need to work on your spelling and grammar. The subject was good. I can under stand where you are comming from. You need to put more feeling in to what you are saying. I think if you were to try to change parts around and play with the feelings behind your words it could be so much stronger. Considering your age it was pretty good.Continue to write.

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