by SilenceBreaksTheHeart Oct 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Dear diary, |
by isabel
Beautiful poem...very well written...Also very easy for me to relate to, my own are also more or less about this, too...(though they are not that good as yours...) |
by Colby
Very good job i liked iti 5/5 |
by Nobodys Hero
Great work! |
by Andi
I loved this poem; i can totally relate since i have cut myself before and have also had depressed thoughts. don't commit suicide, its not worth it 2 end your life. if u could comment on my work i'd really appreciate it |
by Midnight Sun
I think it was really cool how every line in each stanza rhymed. That is so hard for me to do. And it really got me into it....about half way through the poem I was almost yelling at you to talk yourself out of it! lol, and I loved the line |