I think it was really cool how every line in each stanza rhymed. That is so hard for me to do. And it really got me into it....about half way through the poem I was almost yelling at you to talk yourself out of it! lol, and I loved the line

I'm just gonna close the door
and let my blood and tears mix on the floor.

I thought it was beautifully penned, and it brought a greatly sad picture to mind. Great job!
~Jules

I loved this poem; i can totally relate since i have cut myself before and have also had depressed thoughts. don't commit suicide, its not worth it 2 end your life. if u could comment on my work i'd really appreciate it
andi

Great work!
There was alote of emotion put into this poem!
I loved it!
Hope you feel better soon!
5/5

Very good job i liked iti 5/5

Beautiful poem...very well written...Also very easy for me to relate to, my own are also more or less about this, too...(though they are not that good as yours...)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*