OMG! Those last 2 stanzas, I wrote something kinda sorta like that...well I was gonna make it into a poem but I never did!! lol.

Anyways, I loved this poem...you don't even know. I can relate to this so much. It was just so good. Excellent write!! Never stop!!! 5/5 Take care. Love ya,

- Poetess

Amazing =)

Hi i thought this was an amazing use of words. brilliant poem. really touched and spoke to me. jocasta

Beautiful. I loved it. This is a very good poem. Well done! You're a very talented writer. 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor