Addiction .

by BrokenREALiTy   Oct 7, 2006


I want you to hold me,
Give my hand a little squeeze.
A kiss on the lips,
Show a little love please.

I want you to care,
And feel how I feel.
Say the words like you mean it,
So that I'll believe it's real.

Hold me close,
And hug me tight.
Whisper in my ear,
And call me at night.

Warm up my hands,
And give my cheek a little peck.
Send me off to a fantasy,
I don't want a reality check.

The way you look at her,
Will you do that for me, too?
Tell me the words I long to hear,
The words of, "I love you,"

Give me my fairy tale,
I don't care if it's just fiction.
I just want your love,
Cause you're my addiction.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    An amazing write!
    i liked it alot
    ï like the way you use your words!
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    I rly like this one its rly rly good 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    [Send me off to a fantasy,
    I don't want a reality check.

    ^Such cute words! I loved them, Made me smile along with the rest of the poem. Had the power to make me say awh =P
    Your really good at ending your poems!
    Another ending I really enjoyed.
    Well done. [:

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    That is a really good poem and you put a lot of feelings in it, . . . 5/5 from me!!! 8 )

  • 18 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Yay! i finally get to read the whole poem... hahaa

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