"Death be upon them
for my sickness
of your impuity
be lost"

^ I liked that stanza most. Good poem...deep and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it.... Oh and you spelt Impurity wrong...lol but yeah it was real good.

[[ Poetess ]]

P.S. dont kill me please?

I love your poem, it's deep, and if I may say so, eloquently written, it's an awesome poem, such great emotion. Keep up the awesome work!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~