Hey its amazing it shows a deep pasion that most cant portray! keep it up

This is a good one i give u 5/5

Aww a wonderful sad but beautiful poem. love is such a weird thing. i really like what you said in the poem. really great stuff! keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

This is really good....I love the way you write :) 5/5

Good poem! There is a lot of emotion in it and your word choice is great. My only suggestion for improvement is that the lines are broken up in awkward way sin some spots, which makes the flow a little off, but besides that its perfect! Keep it up--