Still. {Triple Tetractys}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 7, 2006


-Still.-

Still - -
She stands,
With her hands
Grasped onto mine.
The music starts as her feet dance to it,
With every clap her heart beats faster on,
As she looks out
Toward her
Mother,
In
The
Crowd of
People there
To watch her dance.
To the tune of a brand new song never
Heard before the night that she stood right there,
Dancing away
Her troubles.
Smiling,
Still.

© Jenna Elphick
October 7, 2006.

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Tetractys: is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10. You can make double Tetractys by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...

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--Meaning being a little girl who let go of her troubles through art of dance, and metaphorically she was dead from all the pain she had been put through. So although the crowd was clapping, she felt invisible and was able to dance.--

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Wow that flowed wonderfully.. i think ima try a tetractys soon

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    A very well written tetractys. This style really works for the poem. The pauses between each sentence really give it a strong feeling. Nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bravo. Love this style. Have never attempted it though. Looks too hard for me.

    A wonderful write.

    Happiness
    Jeannie