THis is VERY good I like it alot. I wish i could wirte like you can. keep up the good work.

AWesome poem. so sad but wounderful ending. it has something that everyone can relate. gr8 job:)

This was like the greatest poem ever! I think i like it so much because i can totally relate. Please keep putting up poems like this!

Wow... i hope the guy who did that to me also learns that lesson, great poem!

Wow. ur kno the beginning of ur poem is exactely wat im goin thru atm....dam guy i love. wish my ending would end like yours

xoxox