Well written poem... virtually flawless. I looked for error's and found none (gee, not one error on a poem I've commented on today. Maybe people are getting better!). This poem is visibly heartfelt, and I can relate to this very well, due to my own experience in the area of lost love and seeing love with new love. *Sigh*. I hope that you're over it, m'dear... you can't hold on forever.

5/5
~Stephen White

Very good poem. I can relate to it, unfortunately. Don't let him get you down!

~love~

I totally agree with you, but what can you do, "totally random girl" lol
any way, amazing the words , everything was heartfelt. i love it

This is GREAT. i agree with "love"
i can relate too.
and i hope this poem isnt true for you hun.
your an amazing writer and i cant wait to hear more from you!
:)
<3Ashley