Unsuicial Love

by Andi   Oct 7, 2006


They had been the perfect pair,
even they were unaware,
of how strong there love was,
like they were a match from up above.

Then the dreadful day came,
when they knew that things would never be the same,
the doctor told her she was really sick,
that soon she would kick.

Through the hard times he stood by her side,
The threat of death could never divide,
the two of them,
from living the rest of there life.

Then the dreaded day came,
this sickness could not be tamed,
she died that day,
her body silently lay.

He wanted to be with her,
of that he was sure,
a thought came to his mind,
but he didn't think it was right.

so badly he wanted to die,
just so he could be by her side,
he knew that he could take a few pills,
then he could be with her against the worlds wills.

Then a thought came to his mind,
what about the people that would have to find,
his lifeless body lying there,
how would they try to bear.

He thought of his family,
and then his friends,
what would happen to them,
would they too take there own life.

So he put down the pills,
and lay down the knife,
he knew that he would be alright,
but right know he just had to cry.

*just so u know this isn't from experience....just something i thought of, I'm not suicidal and never will be!!!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    AWW;; SWEETiE! THiS iS SAD! KEEP iT UP!

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  • 18 years ago

    by DragonGirl

    Amazing! just splendid! I'm lost in words... but heres a couple.. I like more detail! (not meaning to sound mean)

  • 18 years ago

    by BeLLa

    I like this poem, it got me in i loved the words you used- well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsie

    This is really amazing. i dig it.

    peace && love.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Its a sad poem.. so im glad its not true =) but its a really good poem.. it was written well.. keep it up!