Only if you choose to

by veronicaaa   Oct 7, 2006


Never will i give up hope
on my best wishes and dreams
for after the rain has stopped
the sun will appear and all your negatives
will be nothing but forgotten thoughts.

if i choose to give up
on something that couldve been
after the rain will be nothing
but muddy puddles
and the smell of fog
from the thought of regret.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    *,,Cute poem. I love the idea of it.
    Thanks for the comment && keep it up!,,*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    I really liked the way you describe regret as an undertone to rain and muddy puddles. Great use of description. Keep writing you have talent.

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