True Loves Forever

by Aonica   Oct 7, 2006


PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND IF I SHOULD CONTINUE WRITING...CUZ I FEEL LIKE I SOMETIMES SHOULDNT! PLEASE COMMENT AMD LET ME KNOW!

*thank you to everyone who does*

Theres nights when i cant help and think what i have
theres nights when i stop and listen to his heartbeat
theres nights when i want to LAY there and in his arms
theres just these times when i want nothing but the
feel of his breath on my neck
i want nothing more than to feel the touch of his skin against mine
nothing more than his voice whispering in my ear
telling me he loves me
telling me he wants it to last a lifetime
he wants it to last FOREVER!
what guy would tell you that
who else other than a true love
other than your own soft voice repeating it over and over
and hoping he means it
then his voice saying it again and again to you in your ear
and realizing...ITS TRUE!
whatever word he said..he yelled...he whispered...
he meant it...
HE MEANT IT ALL!
theres the days when you spend hours thinkin of him
thinkin of the nights you were together
theres the days when you spend every minute with him
then go home..and say "thats just not long enough"
when spending hours at a time each and every day
and thinking thats just not enough
thats when you know that maybe hes the one
the one you want to live your life with
and think that maybe hes the reason
WHY YOUR LIVING!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Smakka

    Reading that poem makes me wish i had someone like that. Its very good and you should defenatly keep writing. Keep it up.

    (read one of my poems and see what you think)