This is a really good poem i love it. you are so talented keep it up shanik

This is a great poem :)

'Blood and tears
I begin to befriend
no matter how much
I want this to end'

- Love that part.

Every part has a great rythm and it kept my attention (which is a hard thing to do, believe me).

Anyways, thanks for the comment, I doubt I'll post anything new anytime soon, but I'm glad you liked my poem.

~Scarlett