Comments : Moments Forever Faded

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    A deep and true meaning in this poem. Bringing the light on your message you wish to put across. Nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    THAT WAS SO GOOD! Even with my little sister yelling in my ear I got caught up in all of the emotion that you wrote with. Thank you so much for sharing that with us! You are such a wonderfully talented writer...keep it up! 5/5 for sure!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    That was so touching, since my Grandfather experiences it too.

    In shadows cast, they do persist
    Like broken pieces, that don't belong.

    Good way of putting it! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by joern

    Really nice poem. If nice is the right word. seems like you are eigtyfour :-)