That's so sad, and true in a sense. but great poem shanik

Nice poem. You give it a feeling of mortality when you describe the baby, with it's fingers and toes. It struck me strongly. Good poem.

... It makes me wonder what happend? what caused the death. I like that in a poem... makes the reader want to know more...

Thanks so much, you guys are like me, you want something out of a poem, not just words...hit me back at my email or messenger..
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