I feel exactly like that, it hurts a WHOLE lot! You are very good at decribing emotions, I try to be but i'm not really sure if i can. Great poem, it made me feel my pain again, but i loved it! |
by Breeeezie
Id call it your work. my teacher wants me to find 5 suicidel poems then i have to make 5 useing my words. but its ok i wont. i understand how u feel |
by The WriTer
I can relate to this poem, so muuuuuuuuch. i have a friend like this totally, but the one difference is he did let me go. so just telln ya u did a good job, because i love poems that i can relate to. |
by Tiffany
That was really sad and emotional. You're such a great poet!!! |
Aww. This was real sad, but the rhyming flowed well and was a great read. wonderful work 6/6 |