As i sit...

by xCoLdHeArTx   Oct 8, 2006


As i sit in my seat and see you with her makes me wonder why cant i be her??
As i sit her staring at you as you stare at her makes me wonder why
cant that be her??
You guys laugh so much and hold each other as you hold her with a smile and as she sits there with a frown you back away well she puts you in the dark when i could put you in the light.Your all the things im looking for but its not the same for you!!!
as i sit in my seat you look in her eyes and smile,at lunch i see you with her well you guys laugh and smile as she pushes you away and tells you she needs space as i run up as he crys and ask him if hes ok?
as i hold him i smile he frowns as i put him in the light he pushes me in the dark... how can this be??
its just shows the truth... as he pushs me away i say no you cant do this to me i waited to long for this.!!! you sit down as you sit and stare at her were back where we stared!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I really like the concept of this. It's really good! This one is more like a poem, and the story behind it is good, and sad. The only thing i can comment on, is that you should proof read your work first, before submitting it. Punctuation and spelling, if not written well can ruin a poem. Just some suggestions. Very good poem though! Keep it up hun. =]

    Tammie xo