by xCoLdHeArTx Oct 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
As i sit in my seat and see you with her makes me wonder why cant i be her?? |
by Tammie
I really like the concept of this. It's really good! This one is more like a poem, and the story behind it is good, and sad. The only thing i can comment on, is that you should proof read your work first, before submitting it. Punctuation and spelling, if not written well can ruin a poem. Just some suggestions. Very good poem though! Keep it up hun. =] |